⚠️ SAMPLE AUDIT - ILLUSTRATIVE ONLY (Fictional Company: VibeSync)
VibeSync Landing Page Audit
Target Goal: Demo Bookings for B2B Teams
1. The Roast
VibeSync’s hero section is drowning in jargon. "Next-gen paradigm shifting collaboration" means absolutely nothing to a busy manager. You're asking for a demo before you've even told me what the tool actually *does*. The page feels like a generic template from 2019, lacking any unique visual identity or trust signals.
2. UX & Design Friction
- Leaky Hero: The "Learn More" button is larger than the "Book Demo" button. You are literally training users to ignore your primary goal.
- Ghost Town: No logos, no headshots, no social proof. Why should I trust you with my team's data?
- Mobile Nightmare: The pricing table is a horizontal scroll mess on iPhone 15. Fix the stack.
3. Copy Teardown (Rewrites)
Before
Unleash the power of cross-functional synergy with our robust API-first suite.
After (Recommended)
Automate your team standups and save 4 hours of meetings every week. Connects to Slack in 2 clicks.
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