Sample quick roast (real format)

This is the exact style I deliver: concise, specific, and conversion-first. No fluff.

Site sample: B2B SaaS landing page

Primary leak: Hero headline says what the product is, but not who it is for + outcome by timeframe.

Current: “AI-powered platform for modern teams.”

Fix: “Cut support ticket response time by 32% in 14 days — without hiring.”

3 high-impact fixes shipped in the roast

  1. Message match: Rewrite hero + subhead around audience and measurable outcome.
  2. Trust stack: Move proof (logos, metric, customer quote) directly under CTA.
  3. CTA friction: Replace generic “Get started” with one concrete next step and expected effort/time.

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